Through the dark and dusky dawn,
the murky mist and musky pawns,
the human flaws and corrupted knots;
there are prized possessions I see,
of love, of wonder, of glee.
As spark ignites to form a flame,
agitated – hard to tame.
As a Stallion’s spirit flows away,
so does humanity diminish to give way.
On many days, for many men.
Through the dark and dusky dawn,
the murky mist and musky pawns,
the human flaws and corrupted knots…
For whence we lay on her bosom; the mist, the pawns – all fade away.
Out of mist and murk, out of nowhere,
out of the heavenly bosom that belonged to Earth –
Arose angels and demons;
summoned were Beauty and the Beast.
They unveil the darkest secrets and are sicced upon the most savage of beasts.
In the twilight are many a man made.
In the twilight are heroes failed.
Β© achillesheelpoetry, 2020
Wow Ana! Your choice of words is awesome as always, wonderfully crafted piece β€
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Thanks a bunch, Fariha! π
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My pleasure! β€
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This is beautiful, Ana. A Sign of the Times could not be portrayed any better.
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Thank you very much, Cheemnonso! π
It’s always great to have your feedback
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Itβs always a pleasure
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P.S. I have been inspired by your poem ‘The Monarchs’ in here:
“are sicced upon the most savage of beasts.”
So Thank you for that!!
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Iβm most humbled to learn of this Ana, so, I should thank you moreππ
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Incredible write, Ana! I loved the rhyming, your play on words and the tone was exceptional!!β€οΈ
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Thanks a lot, D, for this intricate a read and comment! π
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Of course!
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Thanks a lot, D, for this intricate a read and comment! π
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It’s so mind blowing, the way you manage to absorb me into your world through poetry. Am and will always be your loyal fan.
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Haha
As am I and will be- a loyal fan!
Thanks a bunch π
I am glad you can relate to “Unveil” this way!!
xx
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and do check ur mail
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Yes, I checked it!
π€ Have mailed you back
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“In the twilight are many a man made.
In the twilight are heroes failed.” π€©π€©
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Thanks a bunch ππΌ
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