We speak of mountains high,
and seas, oh, so deep!
But it’s in the shallows that people lie,
the crevices where humans weep.
© achillesheelpoetry, 2022
We speak of mountains high,
and seas, oh, so deep!
But it’s in the shallows that people lie,
the crevices where humans weep.
© achillesheelpoetry, 2022
Wow, Ana!
I’m in absolute awe of this piece. I’ve read several poems, but never anything quite like this- one that so wholesomely conveys such a profound message in just 4 lines.
Kudos to you girl! Keep writing and keep shining!
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Thank you ever so much ma’am! It’s always a pleasure having you here 😊.
Thanks a ton for always being so generous with your words!
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Enthralling, Ana!
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Appreciate it, Nonso! 😊
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