I wonder what you think of me…
Am I yet another dream of the gazillion in your fancy!?
Yet when you close your eyes, before the eigengrau, after the soul-
Do I resonate?
There is not a single day that a dream doesn’t triumph over succumbing to a black hole.
Little had I known what it is like to dream.
Barring them- the millions like you and me;
I couldn’t pity more the people who’ve never even seen a proper, full fledged dream.
They have taught themselves, I don’t know how. To sleep well, with little to say ciao.
Well hasta la vista, amigos.
I have a few to fulfill, cherish and ponder over before I visit thou.
© achillesheelpoetry, 2020-22
Carpe Diem
(Seize the day)
“I couldn’t pity more the people who’ve never even seen a proper, full fledged dream.”
Ahh, this is such a wonderful and poignant write, Ana! I loved that you ended it with ‘Carpe Diem’ too!✨
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Thank youu ever so kindly, D!
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Wow Ana! Your way with words is amazing, Its often that we realize that what we thought we experienced wasn’t really what it was unless we truly experience it. Beautifully penned. ❤
How have you been doing? sorry i have been off WordPress due to my final exams, I should have made it back sooner
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Thank you, Fariha! 💓
You said it!
It’s great to have you back; I’ve been keeping well, thank you.
What about you? Any upcoming posts?
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Glad to hear you have been keeping well (:
I am fine too, thank you (:
I definitely need to write one in the near future, probably in a day or two.
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Beautiful poem 🥺 You wrote this so excellently. Dreams are certainly one of the little things in life that we need to cherish. But there’s this thing with me 😂 I wake up for 3 seconds and the dreams I had will already be forgotten 🥲
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Thanks a bunch!! 🤗
I was quite skeptical of this one, but your feedback relieves me.
Yes, I couldn’t agree more.
Haha! Happens a lot with me too xD.
Infact at times I spend hours together trying to recollect my dream in vain… I wish there was some sort of super power that made one remember their dreams ✨
Thank you so so much for dropping by Achilles’ Heel, your comment is much appreciated 💖
Ana
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