Today,
don’t forget to smile,
for someday,
we’ll all be on the other side.
When the Sun goes down
and the dark night veils the sight,
I want you to remember,
in oblivion there is a certain disarming respite.
When the Sun goes down
and you hear a chirping noise,
I want you to remember a six year old,
skirty poise clad in a squeaky voice.
When the Sun goes down
and fear seizes the mind,
I want you to remember,
the night sky might be brighter and braver with stars around,
but it takes a real man to walk in the dark, proud.
When the Sun goes down
and you remember the ones that preceded it,
and what they wrought;
and you dream of some that never happened,
know that you don’t always have to stand tall.
When the Sun goes down,
be humble,
for you shall again rise.
To the moon, give a little light.
He needs it more today,
even if it’s just a guise.
When the Sun goes down,
don’t forget to smile.
Don’t forget to close your eyes
and breathe in every part of life.
© achillesheelpoetry, 2022
Dear Ana. I did enjoy the poetry.
“When the Sun goes down,
don’t forget to smile.
Don’t forget to close your eyes
and breathe in every part of life.”
I agree with the above lines. Better to smile and laugh at death. The trickery of a smile will make death ponder. What do we have left? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked the name of your site. Very cool.
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Thanks a bunch, sir, for having stopped by Achilles’ Heel and for this absolutely wonderful comment!
It is so indeed-
Que sera sera, so while we’re at it, it’s better to smile our heart away, for it’s always a wonderful time to be alive!
Thank you again 😊
This post is about why I named my site Achilles’ Heel:
https://achillesheelpoetry.wordpress.com/2020/03/19/achilles-heel/
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So watch, humble yourself and submit to the magnanimity of a great many sun downs, and bask in the glory of a greater many golden hours.
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This is an absolutely stunning poem, Ana! So well-written with an inspiring hue ❤️
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Thanks a bunch, D! ❤️
Always a pleasure having you around 🤗
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wow Ana you never cease to amaze, cheers to the golden sun and to the most beautiful thing adorned by us, our smiles (:
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Thanks a ton, Fariha!
And YOU never cease to amaze me.
Hope you’re doing well.
Cheers!
x A
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Aww, Thank you so much Ana!
I am doing good
How are you?
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All’s great!
Diwali season ✨
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